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be to burn, burn to be

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you love
beauty that's shame.
remarkable really-
your quirks are
but flaws.
you're convinced
i'm synthetic.
never are you so
mistaken.
are you
happy yet?
i think
liars
          are
                    stars.
what be to burn?
we will,
dear.

dear,
will we
burn to be
what stars are?
liars,
think i,
yet happy.
you are
mistaken-
so you are never
synthetic.
i'm convinced your
flaws but are
quirks- your
really remarkable shame
that's beauty.

(I) love you.
Yep, it's completely backwards.
The only thing I added was the (I).
This was fun, but I wouldn't recommend it.
It takes lots of time and lots and lots of thought.


This is for: [link]

This is also for valentine's day, in a way.

This could be for my boyfriend if I had any guts at all.

I love, love, love comments ~~
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Horsewild111's avatar
Backwards and crazy good. I didn't get until I realized it was backwards and then came the "oh!". Ingenious.